[Stml2] Titolo 13ma missione e nuovo teaser

Gio 11 Giu 2015 15:53:15 CEST

Ho finito di revisionare la missione. Ho dovuto fare qualche correzione e
ho spostato alcuni eventi in modo da rendere la narrazione cronologicamente
sensata.
La correzione maggiore è stata dover far quadrare i klingon. Vi ricordate
che forse ci era scappato qualcosa? Beh fino ad un certo punto la Novalis
aveva teletrasportato i sopravvissuti klingon e il Vor'cha era andato
distrutto, poi ricompare con equipaggio ridotto per andare a schiantarsi
contro la broadsword. Ho tagliato un paio di battute e modificato qualche
parola e ora il problema è stato risolto.
Nel file ho lasciato in evidenzatore verde le parti che si potrebbero
tagliare in sede di pubblicazione dell'ebook.
Fatemi sapere
Baci
S.
Cosa faccio invio il file word qui?
Il 02/giu/2015 21:55, "Coral Nimosit" <coral.nimosit a gmail.com> ha scritto:

> Perfetto. Grazie Silvia.
>
> =====================================
> OOO Cmd. Coral Nimosit
> Primo Ufficiale (FO)
> Sez. Comando e Navigazione
> USS Novalis NCC 1772
> coral.nimosit a gmail.com - ICQ 311786902
> =====================================
>                                     N.S.F.
> =====================================
> Il 02/giu/2015 21:51, "Silvia Bianchini" <ltcomm.sibi a gmail.com> ha
> scritto:
>
>> Ok allora lo faccio io... ;-)
>> S.
>> Il 02/giu/2015 21:47, "Coral Nimosit" <coral.nimosit a gmail.com> ha
>> scritto:
>>
>>> In pratica rileggersi tutti i post e verificare che non ci siano
>>> incongruenze tra gli uni e gli altri (eventualmente segnalarle o
>>> correggerle), controllare che ciò che è stato scritto prima collimi con
>>> quanto scritto dopo.
>>>
>>> =====================================
>>> OOO Cmd. Coral Nimosit
>>> Primo Ufficiale (FO)
>>> Sez. Comando e Navigazione
>>> USS Novalis NCC 1772
>>> coral.nimosit a gmail.com - ICQ 311786902
>>> =====================================
>>>                                     N.S.F.
>>> =====================================
>>> Il 02/giu/2015 21:39, "Silvia Bianchini" <ltcomm.sibi a gmail.com> ha
>>> scritto:
>>>
>>>> Cosa sarebbe da fare?
>>>> S.
>>>> Il 02/giu/2015 21:32, "Coral Nimosit" <coral.nimosit a gmail.com> ha
>>>> scritto:
>>>>
>>>>> Ciao ciurma, scusate l'assenza ma ho portato er pupo al mare, con rete
>>>>> flebile dappertutto. C'era pure il sosia di Tolian Soran! Ogni tanto
>>>>> guardavo in cielo, caso mai avessi visto una stringa di energia, una
>>>>> breccia nel continuum..... Boh! Who knows..... Chi si può occupare della
>>>>> revisione della missione appena conclusa?
>>>>>
>>>>> =====================================
>>>>> OOO Cmd. Coral Nimosit
>>>>> Primo Ufficiale (FO)
>>>>> Sez. Comando e Navigazione
>>>>> USS Novalis NCC 1772
>>>>> coral.nimosit a gmail.com - ICQ 311786902
>>>>> =====================================
>>>>>                                     N.S.F.
>>>>> =====================================
>>>>> Il 01/giu/2015 10:44, "Capt. Tetsuya Kuribayashi" <
>>>>> captkuribayashi a gmail.com> ha scritto:
>>>>>
>>>>>> And the winner is ... Venti di Guerra.
>>>>>> La missione entra in revisione e a breve produrremo l'e-book.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Michele
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Il giorno 26 maggio 2015 21:35, Federtrek <federtrek a gmail.com> ha
>>>>>> scritto:
>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Anche a me!!
>>>>>>> Mi pare il titolo giusto
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Federico
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Il giorno 26/mag/2015, alle ore 20:33, Silvia Bianchini <
>>>>>>> ltcomm.sibi a gmail.com> ha scritto:
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Mi piace Venti di guerra...
>>>>>>> S.
>>>>>>> Il 26/mag/2015 20:12, "Capt. Tetsuya Kuribayashi" <
>>>>>>> captkuribayashi a gmail.com> ha scritto:
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> La situazione delle proposte/votazioni è la seguente:
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> "Primo (e secondo) contatto" (Federico)
>>>>>>>> "Vento di guerra" (Riccardo) +2(Ilenia, Otello)
>>>>>>>> con variante ..."Venti di guerra" (Riccardo) +2(Ilenia, Federico)
>>>>>>>> "Guerra occulta" (Riccardo)
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Nessuno ha altre idee?
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Michele
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Il giorno 19 maggio 2015 14:02, Ilenia De Battisti <
>>>>>>>> fulmine791 a gmail.com> ha scritto:
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> Davvero bello ^_^
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> Il giorno 19 maggio 2015 10:54, Federico Gotti <
>>>>>>>>> federtrek a gmail.com> ha scritto:
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> Pollice in su!
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> 2015-05-18 21:34 GMT+02:00 Silvia Bianchini <
>>>>>>>>>> ltcomm.sibi a gmail.com>:
>>>>>>>>>> > Mi piace... :-)
>>>>>>>>>> >
>>>>>>>>>> > Il 18/mag/2015 21:01, "Coral Nimosit" <coral.nimosit a gmail.com>
>>>>>>>>>> ha scritto:
>>>>>>>>>> >>
>>>>>>>>>> >> E una missione di recupero in territorio ostile? Condita da
>>>>>>>>>> reticenza
>>>>>>>>>> >> delle alte sfere federali?
>>>>>>>>>> >>
>>>>>>>>>> >> =====================================
>>>>>>>>>> >> OOO Cmd. Coral Nimosit
>>>>>>>>>> >> Primo Ufficiale (FO)
>>>>>>>>>> >> Sez. Comando e Navigazione
>>>>>>>>>> >> USS Novalis NCC 1772
>>>>>>>>>> >> coral.nimosit a gmail.com - ICQ 311786902
>>>>>>>>>> >> =====================================
>>>>>>>>>> >>                                     N.S.F.
>>>>>>>>>> >> =====================================
>>>>>>>>>> >>
>>>>>>>>>> >> Il 16/mag/2015 19:31, "Federico Gotti" <federtrek a gmail.com>
>>>>>>>>>> ha scritto:
>>>>>>>>>> >>>
>>>>>>>>>> >>> Venti di guerra mi pare adeguato.
>>>>>>>>>> >>>
>>>>>>>>>> >>> Teaser....un "bel" naufragio?!? Buttata li al volo, senza
>>>>>>>>>> troppi
>>>>>>>>>> >>> ragionamenti...
>>>>>>>>>> >>>
>>>>>>>>>> >>> 2015-05-16 17:15 GMT+02:00 Silvia Bianchini <
>>>>>>>>>> ltcomm.sibi a gmail.com>:
>>>>>>>>>> >>> > Per quanto riguarda il titolo ho tabula rasa....
>>>>>>>>>> >>> > Per il teaser avendo proposto l'ultimo cedo la parola a
>>>>>>>>>> qualcun altro
>>>>>>>>>> >>> > ;-)
>>>>>>>>>> >>> > Silvia
>>>>>>>>>> >>> >
>>>>>>>>>> >>> > Il 16/mag/2015 16:05, "Coral Nimosit" <
>>>>>>>>>> coral.nimosit a gmail.com> ha
>>>>>>>>>> >>> > scritto:
>>>>>>>>>> >>> >>
>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> Qualcuno aveva ipotizzato "Venti di guerra" (forse io
>>>>>>>>>> forse no, non me
>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> lo
>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> ricordo più!) e c'erano anche altre opzioni. Dovrei
>>>>>>>>>> recuperare la
>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> mail. Cmq
>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> se ci sono altre idee x il titolo della missione fatele
>>>>>>>>>> presenti in
>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> lista.
>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> Ciao
>>>>>>>>>> >>> >>
>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> =====================================
>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> OOO Cmd. Coral Nimosit
>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> Primo Ufficiale (FO)
>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> Sez. Comando e Navigazione
>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> USS Novalis NCC 1772
>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> coral.nimosit a gmail.com - ICQ 311786902
>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> =====================================
>>>>>>>>>> >>> >>                                     N.S.F.
>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> =====================================
>>>>>>>>>> >>> >>
>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> Ciao a tutti.
>>>>>>>>>> >>> >>
>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> Conclusasi la 13ma missione, non ci resta che procedere
>>>>>>>>>> come segue:
>>>>>>>>>> >>> >>
>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> 1. Dare un titolo
>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> 2. Preparare la copertina
>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> 3. Revisionare la missione
>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> 4. Presentare i teaser per la nuova missione
>>>>>>>>>> >>> >>
>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> Procediamo!
>>>>>>>>>> >>> >>
>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> --
>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> ====================================
>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> OOOO
>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> Captain Tetsuya Kuribayashi
>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> Commanding Officer USS Novalis NCC-1772
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>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> Private comunicator: captkuribayashi a gmail.com
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>>>>>>>>>> threats"
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>>>>>>>> --
>>>>>>>> ====================================
>>>>>>>> OOOO
>>>>>>>> Captain Tetsuya Kuribayashi
>>>>>>>> Commanding Officer USS Novalis NCC-1772
>>>>>>>> ICQ Combadge: 126295405
>>>>>>>> Private comunicator: captkuribayashi a gmail.com
>>>>>>>> Webmaster http://gioco.net/startrek/novalis
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>>>>>> --
>>>>>> ====================================
>>>>>> OOOO
>>>>>> Captain Tetsuya Kuribayashi
>>>>>> Commanding Officer USS Novalis NCC-1772
>>>>>> ICQ Combadge: 126295405
>>>>>> Private comunicator: captkuribayashi a gmail.com
>>>>>> Webmaster http://gioco.net/startrek/novalis
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