[Stml2] Titolo 13ma missione e nuovo teaser
Silvia Bianchini
ltcomm.sibi a gmail.com
Ven 12 Giu 2015 09:27:08 CEST
Figurati... Mi diverto un sacco a correggere e fare revisione... Avrei
voluto lavorare nell'editoria, ma muoiono di fame... Il mio freddo e
sterile lavoro contabile se non altro mi paga il mutuo XD
In giornata provvedo sia a mandarti l'incipit che il rapporto di fine
missione ;-)
La consigliera consiglia :-)
Silvia
Il 12/giu/2015 09:20, "Capt. Tetsuya Kuribayashi" <captkuribayashi a gmail.com>
ha scritto:
> Ciao Silvia.
>
> A nome di tutta la Novalis ti ringrazio per il lavoro di revisione svolto!
> Ora chiederò al mio grafico di fiducia una bella copertina ... magari
> mandami l'incipit così gli sarà più semplice trovare un soggetto adeguato.
> :-)
>
> Michele
>
> Il giorno 11 giugno 2015 16:06, Silvia Bianchini <ltcomm.sibi a gmail.com>
> ha scritto:
>
>> Ok;-)
>> S.
>> Il 11/giu/2015 15:57, "Coral Nimosit" <coral.nimosit a gmail.com> ha
>> scritto:
>>
>>> Grazie Silvia, per l'invio del file non so che dirti, in genere sarebbe
>>> meglio non inviare file in lista che li cassa. Però potresti inviarlo al
>>> capitano. È lui che si occupa dell'ebook.
>>>
>>> =====================================
>>> OOO Cmd. Coral Nimosit
>>> Primo Ufficiale (FO)
>>> Sez. Comando e Navigazione
>>> USS Novalis NCC 1772
>>> coral.nimosit a gmail.com - ICQ 311786902
>>> =====================================
>>> N.S.F.
>>> =====================================
>>> Il 11/giu/2015 15:53, "Silvia Bianchini" <ltcomm.sibi a gmail.com> ha
>>> scritto:
>>>
>>>> Ho finito di revisionare la missione. Ho dovuto fare qualche correzione
>>>> e ho spostato alcuni eventi in modo da rendere la narrazione
>>>> cronologicamente sensata.
>>>> La correzione maggiore è stata dover far quadrare i klingon. Vi
>>>> ricordate che forse ci era scappato qualcosa? Beh fino ad un certo punto la
>>>> Novalis aveva teletrasportato i sopravvissuti klingon e il Vor'cha era
>>>> andato distrutto, poi ricompare con equipaggio ridotto per andare a
>>>> schiantarsi contro la broadsword. Ho tagliato un paio di battute e
>>>> modificato qualche parola e ora il problema è stato risolto.
>>>> Nel file ho lasciato in evidenzatore verde le parti che si potrebbero
>>>> tagliare in sede di pubblicazione dell'ebook.
>>>> Fatemi sapere
>>>> Baci
>>>> S.
>>>> Cosa faccio invio il file word qui?
>>>> Il 02/giu/2015 21:55, "Coral Nimosit" <coral.nimosit a gmail.com> ha
>>>> scritto:
>>>>
>>>>> Perfetto. Grazie Silvia.
>>>>>
>>>>> =====================================
>>>>> OOO Cmd. Coral Nimosit
>>>>> Primo Ufficiale (FO)
>>>>> Sez. Comando e Navigazione
>>>>> USS Novalis NCC 1772
>>>>> coral.nimosit a gmail.com - ICQ 311786902
>>>>> =====================================
>>>>> N.S.F.
>>>>> =====================================
>>>>> Il 02/giu/2015 21:51, "Silvia Bianchini" <ltcomm.sibi a gmail.com> ha
>>>>> scritto:
>>>>>
>>>>>> Ok allora lo faccio io... ;-)
>>>>>> S.
>>>>>> Il 02/giu/2015 21:47, "Coral Nimosit" <coral.nimosit a gmail.com> ha
>>>>>> scritto:
>>>>>>
>>>>>>> In pratica rileggersi tutti i post e verificare che non ci siano
>>>>>>> incongruenze tra gli uni e gli altri (eventualmente segnalarle o
>>>>>>> correggerle), controllare che ciò che è stato scritto prima collimi con
>>>>>>> quanto scritto dopo.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> =====================================
>>>>>>> OOO Cmd. Coral Nimosit
>>>>>>> Primo Ufficiale (FO)
>>>>>>> Sez. Comando e Navigazione
>>>>>>> USS Novalis NCC 1772
>>>>>>> coral.nimosit a gmail.com - ICQ 311786902
>>>>>>> =====================================
>>>>>>> N.S.F.
>>>>>>> =====================================
>>>>>>> Il 02/giu/2015 21:39, "Silvia Bianchini" <ltcomm.sibi a gmail.com> ha
>>>>>>> scritto:
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Cosa sarebbe da fare?
>>>>>>>> S.
>>>>>>>> Il 02/giu/2015 21:32, "Coral Nimosit" <coral.nimosit a gmail.com> ha
>>>>>>>> scritto:
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> Ciao ciurma, scusate l'assenza ma ho portato er pupo al mare, con
>>>>>>>>> rete flebile dappertutto. C'era pure il sosia di Tolian Soran! Ogni tanto
>>>>>>>>> guardavo in cielo, caso mai avessi visto una stringa di energia, una
>>>>>>>>> breccia nel continuum..... Boh! Who knows..... Chi si può occupare della
>>>>>>>>> revisione della missione appena conclusa?
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> =====================================
>>>>>>>>> OOO Cmd. Coral Nimosit
>>>>>>>>> Primo Ufficiale (FO)
>>>>>>>>> Sez. Comando e Navigazione
>>>>>>>>> USS Novalis NCC 1772
>>>>>>>>> coral.nimosit a gmail.com - ICQ 311786902
>>>>>>>>> =====================================
>>>>>>>>> N.S.F.
>>>>>>>>> =====================================
>>>>>>>>> Il 01/giu/2015 10:44, "Capt. Tetsuya Kuribayashi" <
>>>>>>>>> captkuribayashi a gmail.com> ha scritto:
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> And the winner is ... Venti di Guerra.
>>>>>>>>>> La missione entra in revisione e a breve produrremo l'e-book.
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> Michele
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> Il giorno 26 maggio 2015 21:35, Federtrek <federtrek a gmail.com>
>>>>>>>>>> ha scritto:
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>> Anche a me!!
>>>>>>>>>>> Mi pare il titolo giusto
>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>> Federico
>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>> Il giorno 26/mag/2015, alle ore 20:33, Silvia Bianchini <
>>>>>>>>>>> ltcomm.sibi a gmail.com> ha scritto:
>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>> Mi piace Venti di guerra...
>>>>>>>>>>> S.
>>>>>>>>>>> Il 26/mag/2015 20:12, "Capt. Tetsuya Kuribayashi" <
>>>>>>>>>>> captkuribayashi a gmail.com> ha scritto:
>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>> La situazione delle proposte/votazioni è la seguente:
>>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>> "Primo (e secondo) contatto" (Federico)
>>>>>>>>>>>> "Vento di guerra" (Riccardo) +2(Ilenia, Otello)
>>>>>>>>>>>> con variante ..."Venti di guerra" (Riccardo) +2(Ilenia,
>>>>>>>>>>>> Federico)
>>>>>>>>>>>> "Guerra occulta" (Riccardo)
>>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>> Nessuno ha altre idee?
>>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>> Michele
>>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>> Il giorno 19 maggio 2015 14:02, Ilenia De Battisti <
>>>>>>>>>>>> fulmine791 a gmail.com> ha scritto:
>>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>>> Davvero bello ^_^
>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>>> Il giorno 19 maggio 2015 10:54, Federico Gotti <
>>>>>>>>>>>>> federtrek a gmail.com> ha scritto:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Pollice in su!
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 2015-05-18 21:34 GMT+02:00 Silvia Bianchini <
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> ltcomm.sibi a gmail.com>:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > Mi piace... :-)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > Il 18/mag/2015 21:01, "Coral Nimosit" <
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> coral.nimosit a gmail.com> ha scritto:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >> E una missione di recupero in territorio ostile? Condita
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> da reticenza
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >> delle alte sfere federali?
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >> =====================================
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >> OOO Cmd. Coral Nimosit
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >> Primo Ufficiale (FO)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >> Sez. Comando e Navigazione
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >> USS Novalis NCC 1772
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >> coral.nimosit a gmail.com - ICQ 311786902
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >> =====================================
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >> N.S.F.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >> =====================================
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >> Il 16/mag/2015 19:31, "Federico Gotti" <
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> federtrek a gmail.com> ha scritto:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>> Venti di guerra mi pare adeguato.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>> Teaser....un "bel" naufragio?!? Buttata li al volo, senza
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> troppi
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>> ragionamenti...
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>> 2015-05-16 17:15 GMT+02:00 Silvia Bianchini <
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> ltcomm.sibi a gmail.com>:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>> > Per quanto riguarda il titolo ho tabula rasa....
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>> > Per il teaser avendo proposto l'ultimo cedo la parola a
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> qualcun altro
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>> > ;-)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>> > Silvia
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>> >
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>> > Il 16/mag/2015 16:05, "Coral Nimosit" <
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> coral.nimosit a gmail.com> ha
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>> > scritto:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>> >>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> Qualcuno aveva ipotizzato "Venti di guerra" (forse io
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> forse no, non me
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> lo
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> ricordo più!) e c'erano anche altre opzioni. Dovrei
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> recuperare la
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> mail. Cmq
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> se ci sono altre idee x il titolo della missione
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> fatele presenti in
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> lista.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> Ciao
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>> >>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> =====================================
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> OOO Cmd. Coral Nimosit
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> Primo Ufficiale (FO)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> Sez. Comando e Navigazione
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> USS Novalis NCC 1772
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> coral.nimosit a gmail.com - ICQ 311786902
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> =====================================
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> N.S.F.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> =====================================
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>> >>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> Ciao a tutti.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>> >>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> Conclusasi la 13ma missione, non ci resta che
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> procedere come segue:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>> >>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> 1. Dare un titolo
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> 2. Preparare la copertina
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> 3. Revisionare la missione
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> 4. Presentare i teaser per la nuova missione
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>> >>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> Procediamo!
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>> >>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> --
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> ====================================
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> OOOO
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> Captain Tetsuya Kuribayashi
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> Commanding Officer USS Novalis NCC-1772
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> ICQ Combadge: 126295405
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> Private comunicator: captkuribayashi a gmail.com
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>> >> Webmaster http://gioco.net/startrek/novalis
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>>>>>>>>>>>>>> threats"
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>>>>>>>>>>>> ====================================
>>>>>>>>>>>> OOOO
>>>>>>>>>>>> Captain Tetsuya Kuribayashi
>>>>>>>>>>>> Commanding Officer USS Novalis NCC-1772
>>>>>>>>>>>> ICQ Combadge: 126295405
>>>>>>>>>>>> Private comunicator: captkuribayashi a gmail.com
>>>>>>>>>>>> Webmaster http://gioco.net/startrek/novalis
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>>>>>>>>>> ====================================
>>>>>>>>>> OOOO
>>>>>>>>>> Captain Tetsuya Kuribayashi
>>>>>>>>>> Commanding Officer USS Novalis NCC-1772
>>>>>>>>>> ICQ Combadge: 126295405
>>>>>>>>>> Private comunicator: captkuribayashi a gmail.com
>>>>>>>>>> Webmaster http://gioco.net/startrek/novalis
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