[Stml2] [stml2] [16.09] Fuga
Coral Nimosit
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Mar 17 Ott 2017 15:10:54 CEST
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Il giorno 17 ottobre 2017 15:01, Silvia Bianchini <ltcomm.sibi a gmail.com>
ha scritto:
> Trovato...
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> Il 17 ott 2017 14:36, "Coral Nimosit" <coral.nimosit a gmail.com> ha
> scritto:
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>> L'ho mandato in lista il 9 ottobre. Dimmi se è arrivato, altrimenti ve lo
>> rimando. ciao
>>
>>
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>> Il giorno 17 ottobre 2017 14:11, Silvia Bianchini <ltcomm.sibi a gmail.com>
>> ha scritto:
>>
>>> Ric puoi mandare il tuo brano revisionato?
>>>
>>> gracias
>>>
>>> Si.Bi.
>>>
>>> Il giorno 22 settembre 2017 17:38, Coral Nimosit <
>>> coral.nimosit a gmail.com> ha scritto:
>>>
>>>> Salve ciurmaglia, vi avverto che entro il fine settimana affiderò il
>>>> prossimo turno di scrittura. E dovrei anche inviare in lista il mio brano
>>>> revisionato con le correzioni fin qui segnalate. ciao e buon weekend.
>>>>
>>>> Il giorno 19 settembre 2017 17:40, Coral Nimosit <
>>>> coral.nimosit a gmail.com> ha scritto:
>>>>
>>>>> Ho corretto gli errori nei dialoghi e anche la parte in cui il cargo è
>>>>> occultato e (non) spara. Attendo altre segnalazioni e poi rimanderò il file
>>>>> revisionato in lista. ciao
>>>>>
>>>>> Il giorno 18 settembre 2017 23:00, Mauro Fenzio <oxila79 a gmail.com>
>>>>> ha scritto:
>>>>>
>>>>>> Letto il brano a parte i piccoli errori che hanno gia fatto notare io
>>>>>> avrei una curiosità.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> La nave che sta scappando dalla base stellare è possibile che stia in
>>>>>> occultamento riesca a mantenere gli scudi alzati e sparare?
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Il giorno 18 settembre 2017 22:17, Coral Nimosit <
>>>>>> coral.nimosit a gmail.com> ha scritto:
>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Alla fine ho revisionato la bozza finale sul telefono e non viene
>>>>>>> benissimo. Dopo che avrete commentato tutti lo rileggo e correggo. Ciao
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> =====================================
>>>>>>> OOO Cmd. Coral Nimosit
>>>>>>> Primo Ufficiale (FO)
>>>>>>> Sez. Comando e Navigazione
>>>>>>> USS Novalis NCC 1772
>>>>>>> coral.nimosit a gmail.com
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>>>>>>> N.S.F.
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>>>>>>> Il 18/set/2017 19:59 "Federico Gotti" <federtrek a gmail.com> ha
>>>>>>> scritto:
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Letto ora.
>>>>>>>> A me, è piaciuto :D! Come dice Silvia ci sono solo alcuni punti in
>>>>>>>> cui è sfuggito qualche " ma niente di che.
>>>>>>>> ;D
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Ciao
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> 2017-09-18 16:05 GMT+02:00 Coral Nimosit <coral.nimosit a gmail.com>:
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> Bah, non lo so, Ilenia faceva notare la discrepanza tra trilitio e
>>>>>>>>> tricobalto. E' già tanto che non abbia scritto trigliceridi 😂!!!!!!
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> Il fatto di scrivere a spizzico e bocconi è dovuto in massima
>>>>>>>>> parte al fatto che quella peste bubbonica di mio figlio, nel periodo senza
>>>>>>>>> asilo, ha pensato bene di andare a letto più tardi e quindi quel già poco
>>>>>>>>> tempo che riuscivo ritagliarmi la sera per scrivere è definitivamente
>>>>>>>>> defunto. Spero che le cose si assestino visto l'inizio della scuola materna
>>>>>>>>> (santa subito!!!). C'è voluto un pò per riorganizzarmi.
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> Grazie consigliere, lei è troppo umana 😝. Altra mia difficoltà è
>>>>>>>>> stata quella di raccordarmi col post di Ilenia, articolato e dettagliato.
>>>>>>>>> Ci sta che mi sia perso qualcosa.....verificate gente. ciao
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> Il giorno 18 settembre 2017 15:58, Silvia Bianchini <
>>>>>>>>> ltcomm.sibi a gmail.com> ha scritto:
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> Azione concitata e descrizione febbrile, direi che scrivere a
>>>>>>>>>> spizzichi e bocconi sia la ricetta per le scene di azione
>>>>>>>>>> molto bene n.1 :D
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> direi che il prossimo può chiudere, che ne pensate?
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> Si.bi.
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> Il giorno 16 settembre 2017 16:34, Coral Nimosit <
>>>>>>>>>> coral.nimosit a gmail.com> ha scritto:
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>> Bene, segnalatemeli perché ho fatto le corse per mandarlo in
>>>>>>>>>>> lista e ci sta che ci siano alcuni errori.
>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>> =====================================
>>>>>>>>>>> OOO Cmd. Coral Nimosit
>>>>>>>>>>> Primo Ufficiale (FO)
>>>>>>>>>>> Sez. Comando e Navigazione
>>>>>>>>>>> USS Novalis NCC 1772
>>>>>>>>>>> coral.nimosit a gmail.com
>>>>>>>>>>> =====================================
>>>>>>>>>>> N.S.F.
>>>>>>>>>>> =====================================
>>>>>>>>>>> Il 16/set/2017 16:29 "Ilenia De Battisti" <fulmine791 a gmail.com>
>>>>>>>>>>> ha scritto:
>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>> Letto in rapidità, mi riservo di rileggerlo con più calma.
>>>>>>>>>>>> Non mi sembra vi siano errori di consecutio, e gli unici
>>>>>>>>>>>> "errori", se possiamo definirli in tal modo, sono comunque risolvibili in
>>>>>>>>>>>> fase di sistemazione conclusiva (trilitrio al posto di tricobalto.. alcuni
>>>>>>>>>>>> parlati che si fondono con l'azione di chi parla.. ma nulla di che)
>>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>>
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>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> --
>>>>>>>>> Ciao, Ric
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>
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>>>>>
>>>>> --
>>>>> Ciao, Ric
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> ========================================
>>>>> OOO Cmd. Coral Nimosit
>>>>> Primo Ufficiale (FO)
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>>>> Ciao, Ric
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